HI
I have written my first PhD report which is (10000) words and received feedback and comments that need for answers. so, I am looking for an expert writer in (Education policy or policy studies or public policy) who is able to fix all these comments and make it in professional way.
This is the key issues need to fix it
These are the key issues you need to address:
1. Chapter 1: Introduction
The introduction needs a clear rationale and statement of the problem. Please explain:
a. WHY is this research interesting?
b. WHY should we want read this?
c. WHAT is significant about the issue? and therefore,
d. WHAT questions do we need to ask? This leads to your aims and RQs (in the opening chapter). The intro needs to give me a flavour of what you are doing, why and how you are doing it.
e. Your research questions (both of them) are not good they need more detail.
2. Chapter 2: Literature Review
The literature review still does not show that you really know what you are trying to explain. Please address the following issues)
a) show you have a better command of the a. ‘what is policy?’ debate and the different approaches to think what we mean by policy.
b) b show you have a better understanding of Ball’s ‘policy as text and/or discourse’ – why does he make this distinction? what does he hope to achieve? how does it offer an alternative to other perspectives (and what does it add?)?
c) Add more references.
d) Explain policy analysis.
e) Explain different approaches to policy analysis
f) Explain and justify the approach you adopting.
g) Elaborate the big terminologies (e.g. nationalism, positivist westphalian tradition, critical westphalian tradition, positivist post-westphalian tradition, critical post-westphalian tradition, policy sociology tradition, etc.). You cannot just say this and that without elaborating it.
3. Chapter 3: Methodology
Please address the following issues:
a. Since you MENTIONED quite a lot about Foucault and critical policy sociology, explain and justify that your philosophical is CRITICAL. This (Foucauldian approach) will inform your research design data collection and analysis.
b. Explain and justify why you will use interviews, documents and observation. Elaborate how do these link to your research questions? what data do they provide? who will you observe? why? how?
c. What are the relationships between Case Study and Foucauldian approach?